Poems and Short Stories

[Luna]

notdoneyet has read all of these..but I'm posting them for the people who haven't read them.
Soo chaa..enjoy..and erm..*cheer*

This is latest work..from dunno...not sure...


I’ve had this feeling for quite a long time
-Yes a very long time-
I’m surrounded by darkness
It’s a big vast empty space
-All alone-
I scream and cry for help
I have a throbbing pain for belonging
-Displace-
I don’t feel wanted
Despised by all
Hated for something I’ve never done
-Your not wanted-
I’m not wanted
But all I need is for you to believe in me
I had wanted to make a vow…
Never Again Shall I Smile
A soaking pillow is how I wake
Putting on the smile I fake
Now I do belong
I belong in the world
A world by myself
A world where I can smile at my emptiness
My loneliness
For I am alone
Nothing will ever change that

Alone and depressed
It's just me and myself
There's no one out there that will help
And there never will be

Alone and depressed
What more is there to live for
If there is no one to care for
Or anyone that cares for me

Alone and depressed
Closest friends leaving one by one
Can't trust them anymore
When I need help I turn around
And see them laughing at what I say

Alone and depressed
I don't know what to do
So called friends who want me just for the answers
But when I find out
It's already too late
They aren't the ones I am looking for

Alone and depressed
They have no support in me
No one that I can get help from
No one that will help me
I am all alone in this world
I don't know what to say
I don't know what there is to live for
Or what life really means

Alone and depressed
The truth really hurts
There's nothing much I can do
But except the truth
That life isn't perfect
And will never be for me

Another one....Sad..hmmm


She tries to smile...really she does....
the question is does anyone really notice what's inside...
the hate... the pain...the tears...
she just covers it up...
so when she's down...crying her eyes out...
expecting someone to come and save her...
she remembers "no ones coming ..."
so she picks herself up and keeps walking...

Okiess...I shall shut up now..cause nobody like someone who talks to much, cause I know that can be pretty annoying, and another thing I know did you know tha-

Luna shutting up now xD

[dogwoodlover]

I like it, keep writing. I write for my band, and have a lot of old poetry'ish stuff from when life wasn't going quite so well for me :-P. Really though, you should keep it up and keep posting what youre producing, its good and not to mention its kind of therapeutic.

[Luna]

Hehe thanks dogwoodlover!!
I have alot more stuff on the DD. I can post them up if you want.

[velsignet]

Hello,
by no means do I consider myself a poet, but we had to write something in the style of Poe for English class. So with this being more or less my first poem, I was kind of proud of it. Which is why I wanted to share it. Feel free to say whatever you want about it, good or bad. Thanks...

It had been not more desirable than ‘twas today,
And though evident was the right way,
I chose the path that led to devastation and decay.

Had the warnings been heeded
Had the omitted not been the thought,
The transgression would have been superseded
By grace elegantly wrought,

Mortals cannot withstand from being bland
But it has been planned that He can only demand
That it be an endeavor of ours
To take full advantage of that which He empowers

Yet still,
Some among us choose to destroy and kill
And try as we will
We cannot bring it down

In the times to come
We will be numb to the evil we have been freed from
Never more to have a countinence of glum or succumb
To what we have become

And turn from our evil way
Evil way, decay, no more, or disarray
Always will we be running away
To hunger in every way for a perfect life

Due to deliverance
The chance is to advance
To break me from this hypnotic trance
That has withheld me for such a time

Now we are free
All that must be done is agree
For there is a decree
That will not be ignored

[notdoneyet]

I liked the poem, Velsignet, I think it was pretty well done, though I don't think the ending is as strong as it could have been, but other than that I think it's a very good first poem. Keep up the good work.

[notdoneyet]

I've posted most of my poems on so many boards that I'll refrain from posting some of my older stuff I really liked, but I have a few new poems that I'll put up.

-Bleeding Hearts-

In the dead of the night
They come
Stalking
Waiting for the right moment to…
I can’t stand it any more
How these things creep up on me
At night the demons come for me
Leaving me soulless I long to kill the pain
To feed on anything that will give me pleasure
The demons fill my dreams
Haunting my every waking step
I can’t escape
At least not any more
I cry until my heart bleeds
But there is no relief
There never can be
Their teeth sink deep
As they enjoy this new found flesh
Longing to destroy my dreams
Shattered and broken I remain
Only a shadow of myself
Not strong enough to face the coming sun
I slink off into the shadows of my fears.
Maybe one day I can slay these demons
But for now all I can manage to do is sleep my life away.


-Life as Ghost-

Maybe one day I will learn what it’s like to breathe,
To fill my lungs with air,
And smell the sweetness of the sun,
I’ll run in meadows full of flowers,
Falling down in a spray of petals,
I’ll praise the rising of the sun,
And wish for the days to never end.

I’ll swim in the ocean,
So deep and blue,
Feel the water over my skin for the first time,
Things will never again be complicated,
I’ll have all the time in the world,
My memory will be like the sky,
-forever clear and blue.

Wishes are for stars,
None shine here any more,
Night is forever long,
As darkness completely fills my mind,
Memories are no more,
-They never were really,
Lost forever in the haze.

My dreams are forever shattered,
Forgotten in the depths of my mind,
From this slumber so deep,
I will never awaken again.

[velsignet]

Thanks you, both for the encouragement and the criticism.

[Luna]

I think your a very good poet velsignet

notdoneyet is always awesome

*bows down to both whilst chanting, I'm not worthy*